Rate my tele-dad Synchro deck and tell me what i need and need to remove?

try adding some actual DADs take out x1 dark bribe and x1 brain control to add x2 d-draw if you want you could try to place x1 burial from the different dimension also add x1 or2 dark grepher he is basically a first turn DAD if over the dekoichi take out x1 commander for x1 rose warrior of revenge take out the other commander for x1 Armageddon knight take out both vandalgyon for the allure of darkness take out x1 dark bribe for x1 D.D crow side in x3 kycoo the ghost destroyer against a mirror match also try to fit in x1 darklord zerato